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WARRIORS
Forest of Mysteries
There will be two, one blinded by ambition, the other by jealousy… The clans of wild cats are at peace. Thunderclan has an overload of kits and are finding it harder than ever to feed their young. But when an old rivalry and a mysterious death threatens to destroy the clan she loves, Colorstar, Thunderclan’s leader, will have to make the hardest decision of her young life.
Prologue
“Oh! Crowfur, why? ”Brownstripe wailed, his face grief-stricken. Colorstar sighed. Crowfur was not Brownstripe mate at the moment (she was once), but he still loves her. This death wasn’t over a border fight or stolen prey, it’s a mystery. Suddenly Brownstripe turned, his eye blazing, “A Thunderclan cat killed Crowfur!” He yowled, “A Thunderclan cat with black fur!” His amber eyes staring directly at Afur. “Can you prove it?” Colorstar mewed breaking the hostile stare. Brownstripe moved to the side and Colorstar could see black fur clamped in the dead warrior’s twisted paw. “There is no evidence saying Afur killed Crowfur, but Brownstripe,” Colorstar brushed her tail along his spine, “I will find out who did this and they will be punished severely.”
Chapter one
Colorstar sat listening to the forest around her.
“Afur I hear you, come over here.” Colorstar turned her head to the bushes to the left of her.
“Sorry to disturb you, but I’m nervous. Brownstripe keeps looking at me like I’m a Shadowclan warrior. Please Colorstar you do believe I didn’t kill Crowfur, at least not in cold blood.” Afur was shaking.
“Afur, I don’t believe you killed her but, you are the only Thunderclan cat with black fur besides Blackback and Nightcloud and she is Crowfur’s mother and right now I don’t know what to think. So come on back to camp with me.” Colorstar got up and Afur followed her back home.
“Hey come here to kill us all, Afur?” Ivytail, a warrior, snarled.
“Ivytail please, Afur has done nothing.” Colorstar begged calmly.
“Yes, innocent till proven guilty.” Iceheart mewed. Brownstripe walked up to them, anger flared in his eyes.
“What about guilty till proven innocent.” He growled.
“That makes no sense, Brownstripe. If you don’t quit it you will be in a lot of trouble, you here?” Colorstar pressed her nose to his.
“Afur, I got my eye on you and I got the clan suspicious, so look out, sleep with one eye open, ‘cause whatever you do, you can’t run.” Brownstripe hissed.
“Just go, Brownstripe,” Colorstar growled.
Chapter two
“Graykit, come forward, from this day tell you have earned your warrior name, you shall be called, Graypaw. Whitekit, until you have earned your warrior name, you will be called, Whitepaw. Blackback, you will mentor Graypaw. Green-eyes, you will mentor Whitepaw.” Colorstar purred then add wearily, “One more thing, Afur has something to say.” About three fourths of the clan yowled angrily; the other one fourth said nothing.
“First off, that was mean and second I am sad, you guys hate me and I don’t know why”- “You don’t know why, you mouse-brain, you killed Crowfur!” Ivytail cut him off.
“I didn’t even touch her; I’d rather do without her.” Afur immediately regretted ever saying that.
“He would rather be without her, you did kill her. You see, Afur was jealous of Brownstripe with the prettiest she-cat around and he hates Brownstripe already so, he, out of hatred, he kills Crowfur.” Ivytail made an actually reasonable explanation.
“You misunderstood him, he meant, Crowfur was not a big part of his life therefore her death does not bug him that much.” Blackback meowed, helping his friend. He obviously wants Afur to be left alone.
“So, Blackback’s on Afur’s side.” Brownstripe growled at Blackback.
“Enough, already until Starclan tells me what to do, no one killed Crowfur!” Colorstar yowled. “Afur, Blackback, and Iceheart get some traveling herbs, we are going to highstones.” She leaped down and sat outside the camp entrance.
Chapter Three
Colorstar thought for a moment, Afur couldn’t have killed Crowfur, he is too, loyal. Blackback wouldn’t hurt a fly, and Nightcloud is Crowfur’s mother. Colorstar shook her head, clearing her thoughts.
“Come.” She called Afur, Blackback, and left Iceheart to guard the entrance to moonstone. “Finally made it, Blackback you have not yet seen moonstone therefore you will be unprepared, do not look directly at the rock, okay?”
“Yes, I see.” Blackback mewed. Suddenly moonlight sputtered into the cave. It lit the rock, and Colorstar placed her nose on it. She fell in to complete black nothingness.
“Colorstar, I know why you are here and though I will not give you the answerer to this death, I will give you a hint to it, though they loved one another before, a sudden burst of hate made the other kill. Use this information well, dear sister of mine.” The voice of Breezeheart faded.
“That hint was all I needed.” Colorstar mewed, sitting up.
“What?” Afur meowed. Colorstar ignored him and walked out of the cave.
“The hint what is I”- “Afur enough! The hint is: though they loved one another before, a sudden burst of hate made the other kill.” Colorstar growled. “It’s Brownstripe! Don’t you see?”
“Oh, then why does he blame me when he knows he did it?” Afur mewed angrily.
“Oh why do I even bother with you, obviously because he wants no one to know he did it and he hates you. So, he makes the clan mistrust you.” Colorstar growled, but she still didn’t know if it really was Brownstripe. Finally they get back to camp.
“Brownstripe I’d like to see you in my den.” Colorstar mewed.
Chapter Four
“Brownstripe, you killed Crowfur, why?” Colorstar meowed calmly.
“Okay, I know your are Afur’s mother but I never thought you had his stupidity. Me, kill Crowfur, you are nuts to say that. Okay I think I should tell you, I saw black fur and smelled Thunderclan scent, but not Afur’s.” Brownstripe confessed.
“Who’s then?” Colorstar prompted.
“I couldn’t make it out, sorry.” Brownstripe mewed.
“It is alright and for telling the truth I give you no punishment.” Colorstar purred.
“One uh, one more thing tell Afur I’m sorry and I want him to be my friend.” Brownstripe mewed as he walked out of Colorstar’s den. Colorstar padded out of the den and jumped onto the highrock.
“My clan, gather around this great rock. I think Brownstripe has something to say, Brownstripe?” Colorstar called. Brownstripe walked forward.
“I have a confession to make Afur didn’t kill Crowfur I don’t really know who did.” Brownstripe
looked at his paws in shame. “And Afur if there is any way for you to forgive me; I’d be honored to have the deputy as my friend.” He added hopefully. Afur laughed loudly.
“After all you caused me,” Brownstripe hung his head low, “Its only natural I be your friend, come here you.” Afur laughed even louder. He walked over to Brownstripe and cuffed him gently on the ear. Brownstripe purred.
“I’d rather have you as friend than an enemy.” Brownstripe mewed.
Chapter Five
Colorstar purred Iceheart and Blackback, her mates, lay beside her.
“Colorstar, who did kill Crowfur?” Iceheart mewed. Colorstar shook her head.
“I don’t know, but I think it was… Blackback!” She yowled playfully.
“I did not! I wasn’t snooping around the night she died.” Blackback yowled sounding speciously defiant. Iceheart and Colorstar looked at each other and Colorstar nodded to Iceheart. Iceheart grasped Blackback and told him,
“What do you know about Crowfur’s death?” Blackback shivered.
“O-o-okay, s-she I was out to w-w-wiz, and she was there killing C-Crowfur, I want to s-stop her but i-it was to l-late and she th-threated to kill me i-if I said she k-killed Crowfur.” Blackback dropped in and out of conciseness.
“Who did it, who killed Crowfur!?” Colorstar could feel the tips of her claws.
“Nugh.” Blackback fainted. Colorstar squealed.
“Blackback oh no, Mothwhisker!” She yowled and the old medicine cat came fast than a rabbit hopped.
“Oh, Blackback,” She muttered, “Colorstar I’m sorry”- “He’s dead!?” Colorstar wailed.
“No far from it, he has only fainted but he may be like this for many moonrises.
Characters
THUNDERCLAN
Leader:
Colorstar-Tortoiseshell and white she-cat, ice-blue eyes Deputy:
Afur-Black tom with white chest and white tuff of fur between the ears, ice-blue eyes
Medicine Cat:
Mothwhisker-White she-cat with a ginger spot on her right eye
Apprentice-Jaypaw
Warriors: (Toms, and she-cats without kits)
Iceheart-cream tom, ocean-blue eyes.
Apprentice-Bramblepaw
Brownstripe-Dark brown tabby tom, amber eyes. Looks like his father, Tigerclaw.
Blackback-Black tom with grayish cream chest and muzzle, dark blue eyes
Ivytail-White tabby tom, silver eyes
Whitestorm-Big white tom
Fireheart-Ginger tom with flame-colored pelt
Crowfur-Pitch-black she-cat with white dash on her chest, bright green eyes, twisted forepaw.
Turtlepelt-Tortoiseshell and white she-cat, ice-blue eyes
Green-eyes-White tom with dark brown patches, brightest green eyes
Longtail-Pale tabby tom with dark black stripes
Apprentices: (More than six moons old in training to become warriors)
Jaypaw-Gray tabby tom with blue eyes. Blind. Apprentice to the Medicine cat
Bramblepaw-Dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Queens: (She-cats expecting or nursing kits)
Bumblebee-White she-cat with dark cream splotches, ocean-blue eyes. Though not expecting or nursing kits she stays in the nursery to help first-time mothers
Goldenflower-Pale ginger she-cat, Colorstar's most trusted adviser. Elderly.
Speckletail-pale tabby
Cinderheart-Dark gray tabby she-cat. Mother of Afur's kits (Graykit-Black tom with light gray underbelly, Whitekit-Dark gray almost black she-cat with white tail-tip)
Elders: (warriors and queens now retired)
Harrypelt-Very very pale ginger tom, blue eyes. Long legged with wedged face. Colorstar's brother
Mousefur-Small dusky brown she-cat, Harrypelt's mate
Nightcoud-Black she-cat with a strong connection to Starclan, Mother of Crowfur.
THUNDERCLAN STARCLAN
Bluestar-Blue-gray she-cat with silver tangled around her muzzle, Colorstar's mother
Yellowfang-Dark gray she-cat, sharp-tounged, Colorstar’s Friend
Spottedleaf-Dark tortoiseshell she-cat
Breezeheart-Very dark ginger she-cat with fluffy tail like a feather, Colorstar’s sister. Iceheart's first mate though she was one of the cats who denied his exception into the clan
Tigerclaw-Big dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes. Colorstar's first mate, Afur's father
SHADOWCLAN
Leader:
Tawnystar-Tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes
Deputy:
Whitewater-White she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye
Medicine Cat:
Littlecould-very small tabby tom
Apprentice: Flamepaw
Warriors:
Oakfur-Small brown tom
Apprentice: Tigerpaw
Rowanclaw-Ginger tom
Smokefur-Black tom
Apprentices:
Flamepaw-Ginger tom
Tigerpaw-dark tabby tom
Queens:
Snowbird-Pure white she-cat
SHADOWCLAN STARCLN
Russetstar-dark ginger she-cat. Was once one of Colorstar’s best friends.
Blackstar-Big white tom with huge jet-black paws
WINDCLAN
Leader:
Onestar-Brown tabby tom
Deputy:
Ashfoot-gray she-cat
Medicine Cat:
Barkface-Sort-tailed brown tom
Apprentice: Kestrelpaw
Warriors:
Crowfeather-Dark gray tom
Apprentices:
Kestrelpaw-Mottled gray tom
WINDCLAN STARCLAN
Tallstar-Black and white tom
RIVERCLAN
Leader:
Mistystar-Blue-gray she-cat with blue eyes
Deputy:
Sneezenose-Gray and white tom
Medicine Cat:
Willowshine-Gray tabby she-cat
Warriors:
Blackclaw-Black tom
Elders:
Heavystep-Thickest tabby tom
RIVERCLAN STARCLAN
Lepordstar-Unuseal spotted golden tabby she-cat
Mothwing-Golden she-cat, died of a sickness caught by Lepordstar killing them both
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Happy reading this is my fanfiction, the caracters are at the bottom so you will need to scroll down until you see Thunderclan
WARRIORS
Forest of Mysteries
There will be two, one blinded by ambition, the other by jealousy… The clans of wild cats are at peace. Thunderclan has an overload of kits and are finding it harder than ever to feed their young. But when an old rivalry and a mysterious death threatens to destroy the clan she loves, Colorstar, Thunderclan’s leader, will have to make the hardest decision of her young life.
Prologue
“Oh! Crowfur, why? ”Brownstripe wailed, his face grief-stricken. Colorstar sighed. Crowfur was not Brownstripe mate at the moment (she was once), but he still loves her. This death wasn’t over a border fight or stolen prey, it’s a mystery. Suddenly Brownstripe turned, his eye blazing, “A Thunderclan cat killed Crowfur!” He yowled, “A Thunderclan cat with black fur!” His amber eyes staring directly at Afur. “Can you prove it?” Colorstar mewed breaking the hostile stare. Brownstripe moved to the side and Colorstar could see black fur clamped in the dead warrior’s twisted paw. “There is no evidence saying Afur killed Crowfur, but Brownstripe,” Colorstar brushed her tail along his spine, “I will find out who did this and they will be punished severely.”
Chapter one
Colorstar sat listening to the forest around her.
“Afur I hear you, come over here.” Colorstar turned her head to the bushes to the left of her.
“Sorry to disturb you, but I’m nervous. Brownstripe keeps looking at me like I’m a Shadowclan warrior. Please Colorstar you do believe I didn’t kill Crowfur, at least not in cold blood.” Afur was shaking.
“Afur, I don’t believe you killed her but, you are the only Thunderclan cat with black fur besides Blackback and Nightcloud and she is Crowfur’s mother and right now I don’t know what to think. So come on back to camp with me.” Colorstar got up and Afur followed her back home.
“Hey come here to kill us all, Afur?” Ivytail, a warrior, snarled.
“Ivytail please, Afur has done nothing.” Colorstar begged calmly.
“Yes, innocent till proven guilty.” Iceheart mewed. Brownstripe walked up to them, anger flared in his eyes.
“What about guilty till proven innocent.” He growled.
“That makes no sense, Brownstripe. If you don’t quit it you will be in a lot of trouble, you here?” Colorstar pressed her nose to his.
“Afur, I got my eye on you and I got the clan suspicious, so look out, sleep with one eye open, ‘cause whatever you do, you can’t run.” Brownstripe hissed.
“Just go, Brownstripe,” Colorstar growled.
Chapter two
“Graykit, come forward, from this day tell you have earned your warrior name, you shall be called, Graypaw. Whitekit, until you have earned your warrior name, you will be called, Whitepaw. Blackback, you will mentor Graypaw. Green-eyes, you will mentor Whitepaw.” Colorstar purred then add wearily, “One more thing, Afur has something to say.” About three fourths of the clan yowled angrily; the other one fourth said nothing.
“First off, that was mean and second I am sad, you guys hate me and I don’t know why”- “You don’t know why, you mouse-brain, you killed Crowfur!” Ivytail cut him off.
“I didn’t even touch her; I’d rather do without her.” Afur immediately regretted ever saying that.
“He would rather be without her, you did kill her. You see, Afur was jealous of Brownstripe with the prettiest she-cat around and he hates Brownstripe already so, he, out of hatred, he kills Crowfur.” Ivytail made an actually reasonable explanation.
“You misunderstood him, he meant, Crowfur was not a big part of his life therefore her death does not bug him that much.” Blackback meowed, helping his friend. He obviously wants Afur to be left alone.
“So, Blackback’s on Afur’s side.” Brownstripe growled at Blackback.
“Enough, already until Starclan tells me what to do, no one killed Crowfur!” Colorstar yowled. “Afur, Blackback, and Iceheart get some traveling herbs, we are going to highstones.” She leaped down and sat outside the camp entrance.
Chapter Three
Colorstar thought for a moment, Afur couldn’t have killed Crowfur, he is too, loyal. Blackback wouldn’t hurt a fly, and Nightcloud is Crowfur’s mother. Colorstar shook her head, clearing her thoughts.
“Come.” She called Afur, Blackback, and left Iceheart to guard the entrance to moonstone. “Finally made it, Blackback you have not yet seen moonstone therefore you will be unprepared, do not look directly at the rock, okay?”
“Yes, I see.” Blackback mewed. Suddenly moonlight sputtered into the cave. It lit the rock, and Colorstar placed her nose on it. She fell in to complete black nothingness.
“Colorstar, I know why you are here and though I will not give you the answerer to this death, I will give you a hint to it, though they loved one another before, a sudden burst of hate made the other kill. Use this information well, dear sister of mine.” The voice of Breezeheart faded.
“That hint was all I needed.” Colorstar mewed, sitting up.
“What?” Afur meowed. Colorstar ignored him and walked out of the cave.
“The hint what is I”- “Afur enough! The hint is: though they loved one another before, a sudden burst of hate made the other kill.” Colorstar growled. “It’s Brownstripe! Don’t you see?”
“Oh, then why does he blame me when he knows he did it?” Afur mewed angrily.
“Oh why do I even bother with you, obviously because he wants no one to know he did it and he hates you. So, he makes the clan mistrust you.” Colorstar growled, but she still didn’t know if it really was Brownstripe. Finally they get back to camp.
“Brownstripe I’d like to see you in my den.” Colorstar mewed.
Chapter Four
“Brownstripe, you killed Crowfur, why?” Colorstar meowed calmly.
“Okay, I know your are Afur’s mother but I never thought you had his stupidity. Me, kill Crowfur, you are nuts to say that. Okay I think I should tell you, I saw black fur and smelled Thunderclan scent, but not Afur’s.” Brownstripe confessed.
“Who’s then?” Colorstar prompted.
“I couldn’t make it out, sorry.” Brownstripe mewed.
“It is alright and for telling the truth I give you no punishment.” Colorstar purred.
“One uh, one more thing tell Afur I’m sorry and I want him to be my friend.” Brownstripe mewed as he walked out of Colorstar’s den. Colorstar padded out of the den and jumped onto the highrock.
“My clan, gather around this great rock. I think Brownstripe has something to say, Brownstripe?” Colorstar called. Brownstripe walked forward.
“I have a confession to make Afur didn’t kill Crowfur I don’t really know who did.” Brownstripe
looked at his paws in shame. “And Afur if there is any way for you to forgive me; I’d be honored to have the deputy as my friend.” He added hopefully. Afur laughed loudly.
“After all you caused me,” Brownstripe hung his head low, “Its only natural I be your friend, come here you.” Afur laughed even louder. He walked over to Brownstripe and cuffed him gently on the ear. Brownstripe purred.
“I’d rather have you as friend than an enemy.” Brownstripe mewed.
Chapter Five
Colorstar purred Iceheart and Blackback, her mates, lay beside her.
“Colorstar, who did kill Crowfur?” Iceheart mewed. Colorstar shook her head.
“I don’t know, but I think it was… Blackback!” She yowled playfully.
“I did not! I wasn’t snooping around the night she died.” Blackback yowled sounding speciously defiant. Iceheart and Colorstar looked at each other and Colorstar nodded to Iceheart. Iceheart grasped Blackback and told him,
“What do you know about Crowfur’s death?” Blackback shivered.
“O-o-okay, s-she I was out to w-w-wiz, and she was there killing C-Crowfur, I want to s-stop her but i-it was to l-late and she th-threated to kill me i-if I said she k-killed Crowfur.” Blackback dropped in and out of conciseness.
“Who did it, who killed Crowfur!?” Colorstar could feel the tips of her claws.
“Nugh.” Blackback fainted. Colorstar squealed.
“Blackback oh no, Mothwhisker!” She yowled and the old medicine cat came fast than a rabbit hopped.
“Oh, Blackback,” She muttered, “Colorstar I’m sorry”- “He’s dead!?” Colorstar wailed.
“No far from it, he has only fainted but he may be like this for many moonrises.
Characters
THUNDERCLAN
Leader:
Colorstar-Tortoiseshell and white she-cat, ice-blue eyes Deputy:
Afur-Black tom with white chest and white tuff of fur between the ears, ice-blue eyes
Medicine Cat:
Mothwhisker-White she-cat with a ginger spot on her right eye
Apprentice-Jaypaw
Warriors: (Toms, and she-cats without kits)
Iceheart-cream tom, ocean-blue eyes.
Apprentice-Bramblepaw
Brownstripe-Dark brown tabby tom, amber eyes. Looks like his father, Tigerclaw.
Blackback-Black tom with grayish cream chest and muzzle, dark blue eyes
Ivytail-White tabby tom, silver eyes
Whitestorm-Big white tom
Fireheart-Ginger tom with flame-colored pelt
Crowfur-Pitch-black she-cat with white dash on her chest, bright green eyes, twisted forepaw.
Turtlepelt-Tortoiseshell and white she-cat, ice-blue eyes
Green-eyes-White tom with dark brown patches, brightest green eyes
Longtail-Pale tabby tom with dark black stripes
Apprentices: (More than six moons old in training to become warriors)
Jaypaw-Gray tabby tom with blue eyes. Blind. Apprentice to the Medicine cat
Bramblepaw-Dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Queens: (She-cats expecting or nursing kits)
Bumblebee-White she-cat with dark cream splotches, ocean-blue eyes. Though not expecting or nursing kits she stays in the nursery to help first-time mothers
Goldenflower-Pale ginger she-cat, Colorstar's most trusted adviser. Elderly.
Speckletail-pale tabby
Cinderheart-Dark gray tabby she-cat. Mother of Afur's kits (Graykit-Black tom with light gray underbelly, Whitekit-Dark gray almost black she-cat with white tail-tip)
Elders: (warriors and queens now retired)
Harrypelt-Very very pale ginger tom, blue eyes. Long legged with wedged face. Colorstar's brother
Mousefur-Small dusky brown she-cat, Harrypelt's mate
Nightcoud-Black she-cat with a strong connection to Starclan, Mother of Crowfur.
THUNDERCLAN STARCLAN
Bluestar-Blue-gray she-cat with silver tangled around her muzzle, Colorstar's mother
Yellowfang-Dark gray she-cat, sharp-tounged, Colorstar’s Friend
Spottedleaf-Dark tortoiseshell she-cat
Breezeheart-Very dark ginger she-cat with fluffy tail like a feather, Colorstar’s sister. Iceheart's first mate though she was one of the cats who denied his exception into the clan
Tigerclaw-Big dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes. Colorstar's first mate, Afur's father
SHADOWCLAN
Leader:
Tawnystar-Tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes
Deputy:
Whitewater-White she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye
Medicine Cat:
Littlecould-very small tabby tom
Apprentice: Flamepaw
Warriors:
Oakfur-Small brown tom
Apprentice: Tigerpaw
Rowanclaw-Ginger tom
Smokefur-Black tom
Apprentices:
Flamepaw-Ginger tom
Tigerpaw-dark tabby tom
Queens:
Snowbird-Pure white she-cat
SHADOWCLAN STARCLN
Russetstar-dark ginger she-cat. Was once one of Colorstar’s best friends.
Blackstar-Big white tom with huge jet-black paws
WINDCLAN
Leader:
Onestar-Brown tabby tom
Deputy:
Ashfoot-gray she-cat
Medicine Cat:
Barkface-Sort-tailed brown tom
Apprentice: Kestrelpaw
Warriors:
Crowfeather-Dark gray tom
Apprentices:
Kestrelpaw-Mottled gray tom
WINDCLAN STARCLAN
Tallstar-Black and white tom
RIVERCLAN
Leader:
Mistystar-Blue-gray she-cat with blue eyes
Deputy:
Sneezenose-Gray and white tom
Medicine Cat:
Willowshine-Gray tabby she-cat
Warriors:
Blackclaw-Black tom
Elders:
Heavystep-Thickest tabby tom
RIVERCLAN STARCLAN
Lepordstar-Unuseal spotted golden tabby she-cat
Mothwing-Golden she-cat, died of a sickness caught by Lepordstar killing them both